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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 8:35 pm    Post subject: latest three to comment on please Reply with quote

please give your honest comments on these three please,

all taken at ISO 200, f/8, 100s, 18mm, slave flash in commander mode

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 9:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay. My first thoughts are why did you use f8 1/100 at night? You could have dropped the shutter speed to 1/30 or 1/15 and you'd still have been frozen by the flash burst, but you'd have had more ambient light in the background. Unless you didn't want to do that.

#1 - It's well timed but it's a shame that the flash is low and we can't see your face due to the shadow from your arm. That spoils it for me.

#2 - That's scaring me. Please don't post anything like that again. Maybe the flash being low in the first pic wasn't a bad thing after all Wink

#3 - It's a shame that there's a lot of flash lighting up the left side of the frame, whereas it's absent from the right side. As a result it draws the attention to the tap & window instead of to yourself. Nice wallride BTW. If you'd had the foresight to manually override the flash zoom to, say 50mm then you could have narrowed the flash to create a nice vignetting effect with yourself in the spotlight (of course easily done in CS2).

Not bad for self portraits though.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 9:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

o rite, i never realised that changes the length of flash did that? thnx for that will do next time Very Happy lol

yeh i tried at like 30s, but then i didn't notice any dif in the background so decided to fuck it and get all the light from flash

and yeh thnx for the tips Very Happy lol

will try to aim flash better next time Wink
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 10:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Trail_Builder wrote:
o rite, i never realised that changes the length of flash did that? thnx for that will do next time Very Happy lol

yeh i tried at like 30s, but then i didn't notice any dif in the background so decided to fuck it and get all the light from flash


It's the width of coverage that it changes rather than the length. Just the same as if you take a photo at 18mm with the SB-600 on the camera and you don't use the 14mm wide panel setting. With that you'll get vignetting at the edges but it's fine with the correct width setting. BTW remember and take the wide panel off as well if you're intentionally narowing the flash.

Fair enough. I'm not surprised it was dark at f8 1/30 and ISO 200 at night. I was just pointing out that you don't need a fast shutter speed to freeze things, in case you decide to try it out again at sunset/dusk.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 12:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

1st - looks like you only have half a head
2nd - wtf?
3rd - ooooo
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 4:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

haha, i love the shadow in the 2nd hahaha



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