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JAW

A few shots of my local trails...







What do you think? (have mercy!)
JAW

well?
rad2themax

The berm one's by far the best of the three. The second is just too centred and a generally boring comp that doesn't show alot of what's happenign either.

The first one's just a bit random, point and shoot style. I know it's a lifestyle but it's still not a particularly exciting/unique one.

The third however, i like how he's framed in the trees, but the natural light means quite alot of blown out highlights. I know he isn't but the angle makes it look a bit like he's looking right at the camera which is a bit distracting.

Oh and as for the 'have mercy', that's not how you learn and improve Razz
JAW

rad2themax wrote:
The berm one's by far the best of the three. The second is just too centred and a generally boring comp that doesn't show alot of what's happenign either.

Yer the third one was my fave, the second was difficult as i was lying in a small hole attempting to show the underside of the hip.

rad2themax wrote:
The first one's just a bit random, point and shoot style. I know it's a lifestyle but it's still not a particularly exciting/unique one.

It definately was point and shoot! I was just trying to show the rider and give a bit of an overview of the trails..
rad2themax wrote:
The third however, i like how he's framed in the trees, but the natural light means quite alot of blown out highlights. I know he isn't but the angle makes it look a bit like he's looking right at the camera which is a bit distracting.


Thanks for the crit dude!

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